Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Support your point of view with reasons and/or example from your own experience.
Nodwdays, education is the best part and parcel in the world and so that every humans should be educated for surving in the world. I think, it is required that school education should be continued until the age of eighteen. I am agree to a large extent that statement so I will put my reasons and exmple in the further paragraphs.
There are myriad of reasons why students study till the age of 18. To begin with, they can study with full of concentration. This is because, during this time, their grasping ability would be more compare to other age group. Apart from this, learners do not have any social or finacial liability which again help the to get education with more focus.
Furthermore, as they can get other monetory and social support from their parents and loved ones. Therefore, their underdeveloped mind can get the maximum number of opportunities to gain the academic sagacity. For instance, I could study with more emphasize on particular subject due to the endorsement of my family members till the age of 18.
To recapitulate, it can be deduced that owing to having adequate support from the near and dear once. Pupils can gain education till the age of 18 in the school. This could be beneficial to them in their future professional and personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ntinued until the age of eighteen. I am agree to a large extent that statement so I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77927927928 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64329989438 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4683106252 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256928087035 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911018524433 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580360778174 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146991240667 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565737121999 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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