The problem of overcrowding should be solved by city planners rather than policies to control population.
Nowadays, day by day increasing population in many cities. So, every individuals are facting lot of problems especially overcrowding. Although it can be said that population may be main reason for overcrowding but it will be taken to action and make proper planning in the cities so that it would be possible to decline that situation. I will discuss my points in further paragraphs.
First of all, if the plan would make properly, the city can make to decline overcrowding, it means proper places and space for moving freely without hurdle on any routes. Moreover, it should be made proper planning to prepare broad road ways like six lanes or more, it can reduce overcrowding. Second, wherever we can go in the city the main thing is parking problem so that it should be made basement parking systems. In additon, also we cannot ignor the traffic problem that common problem today and mostly occur these situations when cross roads so it would be better to make overfly bridge which can help to reduce the overcrowding as well as less accidents.
Moreover, government should make strict rules and regulations for parking system so no one try to park their vehicles on roads. Furthermore, open street market and store should be banned by government. In addition, government should try to develop rural areas so automatically the population in the cities could be possible to decline.
To sum-up, it is fact that population never decrease in the world so every people and government have responsibilities that they should get together to solve the problem of population in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00754716981 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8025975847 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2726164055 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219131495198 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812578593319 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558647701659 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134934104915 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220286334421 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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