A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shows on TV and Cinema affects the actions of young people and therefore increase the violence in our society.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement ? What can be done to reduce violence in the society?
In modern era, technology has changed many things. There is increasing popularity entertainment in television and cinema house but some amount of violence pictures and movies are increasing in our society so that this violence affects directly on the young generation. I agree with large extend of that statement so I will discuss that how to reduce this effects.
first of all, in the world, television is very powerful device or we can say it is a idiot box which is give us more entertainment. Huge numbers of channels are telecasted by channel operators and many channels give us good information and entertainment such as comedy shows, dance shows and family movies but some channels are not good for younger people for instance crime series, wrestling shows, fighter and action movies which is affecting on them mind. Moreover, today in the cinema industries, the glamorous world is spreading more violence on society, because of this reason younger people imitate more and more that things.
On the flip side, people can take some actions to reduce that violence. First, people should oppose it when come such kinds of violence shows and movies and government should bane it. Second, younger people should be smart and understand that such types of shows are not reality of the world but it is just entertainment and so on they should never follow theirs steps.
To conclude, it is reality of the world that youngster only follow such steps which are shown them. People and government are very responsible persons who can stop these violence and they should help to divert their minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, second, so, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01498127341 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55388422257 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7144426057 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279420057183 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100997948702 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787624703089 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166703609588 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610667564267 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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