As people become increasingly more dependent on motorcars, the public transport systems tend to run down. This has serious consequences on both the existing community and the new communities, which are spreading farther and farther from town centres.
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Nowadays, the world has completly changed with thinking of individuals, and they dependent more and more on vehicals, and they are less interesting in the public transport for some phonomenon. Modern people choose easy way and benefits in this fast track world so they can easily cover whole works in the time periods. I will give reason in my further paragraphs.
To begin with, in this busy world, people have no any option to complete their required works within in the period. Moreover, own vehicals are very good for easy to move one to another way in just mints compare to public transport. Furthermore, your own vehicles obviously saving time, more workers in minimum time, and getting less tired. For instance, I have a bike and throughout this vehicals I can complete maximum works list but in the public transport therer are lot of time goes to catching vehicles does not complete desire works lists.
In addition to, own vehicals benefits that we can easy move any time of the d
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 1207.87684729 68% => OK
No of words: 171.0 242.827586207 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82456140351 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47508704502 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2841923471 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953146798941 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405863885173 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318562319738 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057927887523 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416089859842 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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