Certain kinds of music promote learning in their life? Agree or disagree
In modern era, there is an on going debate whether music positively or negatively influences our learning capabilities. In this essay, I shall in agreement describe and argue that music ultimately incentivizes people to built knowledge.
Firstly, there are many reasons why music promotes learning. One main reason, is that we learn by experience and sustain our needs. Moreover, for many generations music has been empowering people in the way we live, believe and express our feelings. Furthermore, music brings people together for example like concerts, religion or same political views. As a result, we share the same feelings, energy and thoughts through music.
In addition, people believe that music can not only have an impact on our hearing but can have a great impact in the way we feel. For example, classical music helps people think, pop music gives people more energy to dance, we are empowered by the tone of sound. In many countries, music is used as a incentive for people to understand powerful messages and initiate powerful movements. In general, music helps people holistically and spiritually. Either sounds, or tones alone can be enough to influence someone to create great art. Research suggests, that animals such as cows are more peaceful when they listen to music and can produce more milk versus those who don't have music.
In conclusion, there are many advantages in listening to different rhythms that the music offers. In my opinion, great artists have given humanity the most influential music. Therefore, peoples lives have been transformed in social and cultural aspects because of music. The future predicts that music can always bring us together even when we experience conflict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23104693141 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64932268924 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6864241876 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155091841002 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612640614541 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295609826476 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107586260761 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121691032863 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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