Children should never be educated at home by their parents.
Discuss the extent to which you are or disagree with this statement by giving examples from your own experience.
It is evident that the first school for any children is their home itself. Some people believe that children should not get their education at their homes. This essay will discuss the reasons why children should attain schools rather than adopting to homeschooling for better learning.
To begin with, educational institutions allow a student to grow as a complete human being. It is lucid to say that schools do not only offer academic learning, albeit it also inculcate a harmonious nature within the child by virtue of interaction with others. For instance, by attending school, a child learn to socialize with different types of other kids and additionally learn how to behave in a particular situation. Thus, learning at schools leads to overall development in child, which homeschooling can not render.
Furthermore, by getting education at home, a child will be confined inside the four walls of his home itself. Owing to their home infrastructure may not allow him to play outdoor sports that can be avail by admitting at schools. It is not appropriate to say that a child should never get educated at home but learning at home really do not develop a child's academic knowledge and his social behavior too. As being socially active may help him later on in his life.
This essay discussed how instead of homeschooling, learning at schools develop necessary skills in a child and makes him a compete person. In my opinion, children should must get the school education in order to develop as a complete individual.
- "It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job".Do you agree or disagree? 80
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples. 75
- In town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small local shops.Do you agree or disagree with this statement. 70
- Currently there is a glut of ill-trained university graduates flooding into economies that have no use for them. Up to thirty percent of applicants should be directed to vocational colleges.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this state 80
- Paper books are and will always be superior to e-books.Discuss the advantages or disadvantages of e-books with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inculcates'?
Suggestion: inculcates
...offer academic learning, albeit it also inculcate a harmonious nature within the child by...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... knowledge and his social behavior too. As being socially active may help him late...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cessary skills in a child and makes him a compete person. In my opinion, children should ...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to develop as a complete individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00392156863 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79111018055 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2656864254 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251928714622 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996337029492 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557335485154 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158449486725 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623290371992 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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