Climate Change
Climate change is one of a major issue which the global is facing in the current context. Therefore in this essay I would like discussing in the factors effecting climate hange and the precautions that could be taken to mitigate the effects.
According to the scientists the main reason for climate change is deforestation, therefore people should consider on re- forestation in order to overcome this serious issue. Secondly, accelerated levels of industrialization also negatively contribute on climate changes. The gasses emmissioned by factories and vehicles also end up with air pollution which ultimately end up with unfavourable weather conditions to the man kind. Due to the global warming, the glazziers starts to melt while increasing the sea levels. This also ends up with drowing down the islands by decreasing the space available for man kind in the universe. Climate change also effects agricultural and livestock industries adversely. Majority of the cultivation get destroyed due to bad weather conditions such as heavy rain, wind, floods and drought conditions.
In order to overcome this issue governments has interveined into this matter by imposing enviromental related laws. Also governments encourage people to use eco friendly equipments and vehicles such as electric cars. For an example government can take policy decissions to encourage people in using bio gasses, wind power and other alternative power sources instead of fossil power sources.
In conclusion it is believed that both individuals and governments bears the responsibility of protecting the environment. For an example United Nations 2030 agenda is one of a major initiative that governments have taken to show their interest in protecting environment together with achieving sustainable development goals.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60218978102 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09802425356 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8533359053 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208621740078 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856016449979 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131291686713 0.071462118173 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127161522957 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130977759292 0.0609392437508 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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