Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons of this change. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience
In the past decade, communication has changed considerably. Although these changes are useful for people, they can be harmful, if abused. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss some of advantages and disadvantages of this change.
To begin with, because of this changing, many benefit and negative effects have created on people's living. At first, Although this evolution has made communication easier than the past, it can make people away from their families and society. Many people have become dependent on recent communication facilities as well as addicted to them. For instance, instead of right using of social networks, many people are falling away from the community by using too much of them.
In addition, while people had to write together or have voice call together, the connection became faster in the past 10 years. Today, social network helps people to have the video call with their friends or families in beyond the world. For instance, a recent research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of people and even companies using social networks in daily works.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on pros and cons of the changes that happened in the relationship, my personal sentiment is that they are beneficial for human, unless false using.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18433179724 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.722726347 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6567977909 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.272727273 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146888305929 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058924474919 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349502232176 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889625194008 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341998228402 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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