Company top management should take in account employees’ suggestions or ideas in their decision-making. Discuss.
These days, these has become a growing trend to see company top management should take in account employee’s suggestion or ideas in their decision-making. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that employees are the persons who take part directly on the process of making products or services. Not only can employees know exactly what are advantages and disadvantages of company’s products or services, but they also give ideas about how to fix the disadvantages and how to improve the quality of the products or services. Needless to say, all the upsides stand company top management in good stead when it come to consider employee’s suggestions or ideas.
However, there are some pitfalls can overwhelm the potential of the benefits of those company top management’s considerations. Another pivotal aspect of this is that there may be too many such suggestions or ideas for top management to solve. The primary one stems from the fact that many suggests are not valuable, thus they will take time of top management to read them. Hence, it is apparent why many are against company top management should consider employee’s suggestions or ideas in their decision-making.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite the drawbacks, the benefits of considering employee’s suggestions or ideas in decision-making are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2380952381 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29236922858 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1683232502 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552454926339 0.242375264174 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205548754863 0.0925447433944 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19148651324 0.071462118173 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328029870603 0.151781067708 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129939143729 0.0609392437508 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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