Due to industrialization, many people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problems in developed countries. What is your opinion?
These days, it has become a growing trend to see several people migrated to developed countries to expand opportunities to study, career, well-beings; however this migration has far reaching impacts on local’s lifestyle. As such, there are both merits and demerits in this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that immigrants contribute partly their expenses to national budgets and economic growth of developed countries. Not only do they spend highly money on language tests, visa, insurance, tuition, but also their working skills and competence support the progress of industrial areas. In particular, Australia have applied successfully to encourage people migrating to studying, working, becoming residents. Needless to say, all these upsides stand developed nations when it comes to giving chances to immigrants.
However, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of migration. The primary one stems from the fact that number of immigrants are headache issues for governments and citizens, regarding to over-population, healthcare, competitive working market. For instance, locals have made complaints about grab chances of jobs as well as change their lifestyles. Last but not least, uneducated people migrate to ruin developed nations by social evils that are huge concerns to residents. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of governments of flourish countries taking into accounts migration.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite the drawbacks, the benefits of immigrants distributing to thriving nations are too great to ignore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55303030303 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9373919299 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5054121162 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174243981476 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506011155313 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561980364103 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885066954828 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595183548422 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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