In the 18th century due to industrialization, a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased problems in developed countries. What is your opinion about this?
The imporatance of industrialisation in deveoped countries, which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of industralisation on lifestyle and increased the problem in developed countries, has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent year. It can be agreed that development of industrialisation in 18th century has result in higher migration, which has affected lifestyle and increased problem in developed countries.
At, the outset, there are saveral reasons that the industrialisation in developed country has increased the problem, but the most conspicious one lies from the fact that people from the under developed country moves with the hope of employment and better life, which results in higher population and increase the problem in developed countries. As an illustration, the research conducted in harward university has revealed that the industrialisation is the reason of increasing the population and pronlem in developed countries.
Nevertheless, there remains the same drawbacks, which can certainly overwhalm the potential influence of indusrialisation in developed country has increased the problem of developed countries, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that even the population and other problem is increased in developed conutries with the development of industrialisation but they have got manpower to work for them. For example, reseach carried out by famous researcher has found that one third of manpower are migrated from overseas in deveoped countries like USA and Australia.
From above discussion, it has been concluded that the idustrialisation in developed country has lead the various problem with the higher number of migrants is prominent, but the need of workforce and its effective management should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72101449275 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43062757 2.71678728327 126% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.5024630542 166% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8802719576 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.375 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.9669160288 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359628680328 0.242375264174 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174521462562 0.0925447433944 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113038856944 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221373169001 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114205767387 0.0609392437508 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 12.6369458128 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 53.1260098522 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.3980295567 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 57.0 Out of 90
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