computer and its advantages
In recent decades humanity invented several gadgets but there is no comparison between the computer and other inventions. The Computer has influenced humanity in several different ways and made its way into a human lifestyle. I am inclined to ponder that every invention has its own merits and demerits but the computer has transformed our lives and has beneficial implications in various sectors.
At the outset, There are myriad reasons to elaborate the advantages of the computer, as it is now being used in various industries like production, education and communication. Before the invention of the computer, the production industry relies on physical and human labour but nowadays the computer with its multifunctions are replacing the human labour and producing the goods on a larger scale.
Another key justification upholding the notion is that education sector is continuously using the computer for reading, writing and doing research. The teaching staff and students can have access to course material at any point in time with the help of the computer. Moreover, audio and video communication are now possible due to computer and internet.
Precisely analysing the facts, I would like to recapitulate that the computer advantages outweigh it's few limitations which can be addressed strategically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...The Computer has influenced humanity in several different ways and made its way into a human life...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...producing the goods on a larger scale. Another key justification upholding the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...possible due to computer and internet. Precisely analysing the facts, I would l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46568627451 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05924378083 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.527143354 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.888888889 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365111880259 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132235973393 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829964097161 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210883920722 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769493518114 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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