The effect of culture shock, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of culture shock has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on immigrants in the recent years. It can be said that as the time progresses, immigrants are becoming more concern about the culture shock. This essay will elaborate some of the possible options that are available to eradicate this problem of cultural shock and thus lead to a logical solution.
At the outset, there are numerous ways to deal with culture shock, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that most immigrants are not well prepared when it comes to dealing with culture shock. For instance, after arriving at a certain country, most immigrants come with the belief of having similar culture as their home country. The things that are quite usual or natural in their home country maybe not be same in another country. Hence, the immigrants become quite demotivated and have to face many problems.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated by culture shock are innumerable, but the most effective one is education which is not impracticable or unattainable. Immigrants learning about the language and culture of the country which they travelling, can greatly benefit them and will also allow themselves to prepare beforehand. For instance, most of the international students, gather sufficient knowledge about their university and place before travelling. As a result, they find it quite easy to interact and adapt with others. Thus, the problem of culture shock can be solved.
For what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that culture shock is an issue which should not be overlooked and immigrants should be well prepared to tackle this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ulture shock. This essay will elaborate some of the possible options that are available to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, may, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17931034483 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73450667468 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0196917417 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213234266522 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786220356493 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066477748531 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139446619979 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722771406818 0.0609392437508 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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