Employers of a company should take suggestions or ideas from employees in taking any decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of taking suggestions from employees while making any decision, which was always debatable has become more controversial. The substantial influence of employees on decision making has sparked the controvesy over the potential impact on the company in the recent years. In my opinion, seeking advice from employees can help to make better decisions, while others may disagreed with view of mine. This essay will elaborate both these sides in greater details and will thus lead to a logical conclusion.
As the offset, there are numerous reasons why employers should involve the employees while taking any decision, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that taking advice from more people helps to make better decisions. For instance, if we add a employee in the decision making, that person will look at issue in different perspective and might also find some short-comings, which might be ignored. Furthermore, adding extra heads might generate more creative ideas. Thus, it can be very helpful if employees are involved in decision making.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that seeking help from employees in taking any decision is not very helpful. There are some reasons to back that up, but the most salient one is that employees might not have better idea about situation of the company. If the employees were involved in the decision making, they might put forward some ideas with might be impracticable for company. As a result, it will waste some valuable times. Therefore, they just want to avoid taking ideas from employees.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that if the employers have a good idea about the potential of their employees then it can be beneficial in decision making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1301369863 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64942804083 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2486403003 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28272881746 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974363706446 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923523840083 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17106467866 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298767134161 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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