Design of buildings have positive or negative impact on people's life and work.
These days multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe, and massive upsurge in the construction of building play a very important role in our life and our health is the most controversial one. I will explain the key point of my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance.
To begin with, I can offer a variety of argument to support my point of view. Foremost among these, style of building play great role in our living standard because we can spend a lot of our time in office ,house or any other place. Most of people like to work on indoor and only farmers are the person who work outdoor while, work indoor we need building and that time if building are not well ventilated we are suffered from suffocation and other respiratory disease.
Another pivotal aspect of my point of view are most of men and women are suffered from asthma, chronic respiratory disease due to lack of oxygen in that house or in work place. Oxygen is not only the reason which affected person health there are also other factors are slope surface, not enough light, ventilation, not good supply of water.
Finally, after taking aforementioned point of view from personal prospective i am inclined to believed that design of building play important role in our life to live better and healthy life has become one of the most talked about things these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days multitude of critical issue are begin d...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...se days multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe, and massive...
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Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...se days multitude of critical issue are begin debated all over the globe, and massive...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of my stance with the help of supporting argument and instance. To begin with, I...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...we can spend a lot of our time in office ,house or any other place. Most of people...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...me in office ,house or any other place. Most of people like to work on indoor and only farmers...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the men') or simply say ''most men''.
Suggestion: most of the men; most men
... pivotal aspect of my point of view are most of men and women are suffered from asthma, chr...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...the reason which affected person health there are also other factors are slope surface, not enough l...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...point of view from personal prospective i am inclined to believed that design of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67768595041 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43836669288 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4859758831 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146368781192 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553832414844 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622566556974 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859738229549 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466716481743 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.