Discuss the opinions why do people prefer to live in high rise apartments and why some don’t
These days, it has become a growing trend to see people opting for living in high rise apartments. As such, there are both merits and demerits, although I am fond of my opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that people are attracted by the modern infrastructure which includes gym centre, swimming pool and so on. Not only could dwellers be only provided various types of leisure facilities, but they could also have a sense of high-quality security. Needless to say, all these upsides stand people in good stead when it comes to living in the modern apartment.
However, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of living in the apartment. The primary one stems from the fact that there is not enough space for people who love gardening. Last but not least, people have a higher risk in term of natural disasters compared to who lives in a private property. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the choice of living in the apartment.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite the drawbacks, the benefits of spending life in the apartment are too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...former outdo the latter. There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1207.87684729 84% => OK
No of words: 212.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77830188679 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53601242595 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5893161916 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0909090909 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207277705779 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659891257999 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502642497127 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103434025776 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541127084432 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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