Recently, the phenomenon of risky sports and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of dangerous activities can be a plus, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the lucrative games can be a plus, I will analyse throughout this essay.
From the social stand point, dangerous activities can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that improving self confidence as well as adventurous are inextricably bound up. According to my own performance, when i was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered physical characteristics. It is beneficial ramifications of both mental problems and stressful situations are apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of educational science, dangerous activities might increase the consequence of intellectual abilities. Moreover, fundamental aspects of practical skills relate to this reality that the demerits of detrimental problems pertain to life threatening sports. As a tangible example, some scientific research has undertaken by prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of dangerous activities correlated negatively with risking taking sports. Hence, It is correct to presume preconceived notions of cultural activities.
To conclude, while there is some compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of dangerous sports far outweigh its drawbacks, not only do the advantages of cultural activities prove the significance of lucrative games, but also pinpoint body balance implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87096774194 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30700231449 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657258064516 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2224858393 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115830296031 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355759446344 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432533351546 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675616189845 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225377427699 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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