Recently, the phenomenon of parents responsibility for children's behavior and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many that the matter of children traits is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by many substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that accepting responsibility can be a plus, I will analyse throughout this essay.
From the social stand point, responsibility by parents can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that nurturing children, as well as educating them, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when i was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered parents responsibility and children behavior. It was beneficial ramifications of both children behavior and treated gracefully apparently can be seen.
within the realm of making progress in society, ignoring educational demenor might increase the consequence of committing crimes. moreover, the fundamental aspects of criminal offense relate to this reality that the demerits of offenders pertain to not appropriate behavior. Some scientific research has undertaken by prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of not paying attention to children behavior correlated negatively with heightening crime rates. Hence, it was correct to presume preconceived notion of children success.
To conclude, while there is some compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of parents responsibility far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of tightly controlling children prove the significance of success, But also pinpoint tribute implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94509803922 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31328225368 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9915179383 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234772106825 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767818432723 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624855773416 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133712631545 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037160310876 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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