Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers to not over-package products in the first place?
Choose which side you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences,
observations or reading.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, most producers have focused more and more on packaging their products. Some people believe that over-packaging is compulsory and producers should package their products to protect them from the outside environment, while others argue that over-packaging has led to dramatic increase in the prices of the products. This essay will discuss the reasons why over-packaging is responsible of the producers and it should not affect on the prices of the products.
Producers shall deliver their products in the form which reach to the consumers without any damages. Over-packaging is the right solution to protect products from any types of deterioration. For example, most of food these days are transferred over the seas, and the best method to preserve them is through over-packaging. Therefore, it seems clear that over packaging is essential and it must be imposed on the producers.
On the other hand, some people think that over-packaging of the products has led to significant rise of the prices. Using additional packaging means paying additional costs. Recent research, which was conducted in USA, has shown that over-packaging of the products leads to increment in prices more that 70% of the original price. But these people are unaware of the fact that over- packaging is necessary for protecting the products from any external detrimental impacts. Thus, over-packaging is very important and it is function of the producers.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason why over-packaging is crucial and producers must preform it within their duties. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that over-packaging is essential and must be done by the producers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tial and must be done by the producers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33948339483 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11903083859 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49815498155 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5404969124 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341779731012 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138666376905 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493087539743 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230211607314 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366455852667 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.