Education is one the profound process which everyone used to go through in his/her lifetime. Some people argue that Einstein was right in saying that education is biggest barrier in learning while some find education system without any fault. This essay will discuss the reasons that why Einstein was right in his statement.
To commence with, there are many reasons which elucidates that education is barrier to learning. First and foremost, nowadays education makes child mind inactive and dull. To instance, various scientific research undertaken by prestigious university assert that current education system needs reformation. Hence, it can be taken into account that education system needs major changes in its core structure.
Further reinforcing, education system is basically based on pre-existed laws and algorithm which leave very small room for creative thinking .Education system should allow students to think out of box and not to cram all theory, history and formula. To give an illustration, in worldwide companies, there is great dearth of talented students. Therefore, education system should focus on innovation and should move from cramming to learning. .
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that preexisted structure of education is not effective as it decreases intelligence. Therefore, I would strongly recommend that Einstein is the profound scientist of all time and is completely right in his statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65437788018 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86356494747 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1358289561 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196658760678 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684989325295 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638083653715 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118037092188 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710459768164 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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