Education is a critical element to the prosperity of any nation. The more educated the people in a
country are, the more successful their nation becomes." Discuss the extent to which you agree or
disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your
own experience or observations.
With no doubt Education is of paramount importance in advancement of any counutry as the more knowlede people attain the more achievement they could gain. However; Education is still not the only factor that leads to prosperity of a population when yet the success of a country also depends on points like social attitude and culture, resources and strategies, and diplomacy.
Education is very much valuable as knowldege is the secret key of doing something correct, and that doing something correct is what take us to the correct result which is the subset of success. Knowledge has side benefits as well such as upgrade in attitude and ideaology of people involved with it or it also give higher individual or international credit to its bearers. However I dont believe it is the only helpful elemet to flourish as a nation.
There are other key elements that contributes to achievments of the poeple of a society like mind health and integraty which brings commitement and that is very important to get the jobs done. on the contrary there might be some high rank scientist that lack of commitment and deligency keeps them away from the success they could make with their knowlege and certificates.
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- Education is a critical element to the prosperity of any nation The more educated the people in a country are the more successful their nation becomes Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement Support your point of view with re 48
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- Some people claim that public transport should be free of charge, while other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 80
- What are the different methods students using to achieve information? Online materials, asking teachers or discussing with classmates? 85
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 85
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...e with their knowlege and certificates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, no doubt, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74676375154 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3922403373 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228452297991 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875916424109 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575082336293 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138413611289 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626053796063 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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