Effects of online shopping on local shopping and to make suggestions how to improve its negative effects.
Nowadays, online shopping sparks the marktets with flood of choice of products for every categories. People have shop online get advantages, however disadvantages exists as well. Every single commodity is avialble and deliverable easily at home with just a order. In this essay I will discuss these problems and explore possible solutions.
There are several problems for people who order online. These includes product quality, size , late delivery and security issue. Since you order online and don't have idea of cloth until you hold it in your hands. This verification led to customer's satisfaction to buy a product. As we do online payments, our personal records go online, it may breach to go in wrong hands while doing transaction. Some e-commerce partners don't provide clear return and warranty policy, cheat the customer sometime.
In solutions, there are many alternatives to form the online e-commerce as a profound way of shopping. Company should ensure product, size and delivery duration for the customer. They must provide outlook for security in terms transaction with proper bank enduring gateway. Providing a clear return and warranty policies is heart winning strategy which holds the customer for longer duration.
In recapitulate, e-commerce provide various advantages but come with aforementioned problems and solutions. I would recommend, online company prioritize the customer's satisfaction and provide better service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59360730594 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84175987261 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8587119846 50.4703680194 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5625 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830473801728 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276402859788 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464989016939 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527833895964 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458552802004 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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