The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible to solve it? Is it the governments, organisation or each individuals?
Over the last few decades, there was an ongoing topic of environmental damage. The main reason for these changes is changing of the human lifestyle. There are many reasons that affect the environment. this essay discusses the causes and solutions of the environmental effects.
Firstly, the main cause for the environmental effects is pollution and waste from the factories. The waste from the factories pollutes the air and water. pollution from the vehicles and greenhouse effects are other common reasons for the damage. The major issue of the environmental damage is overusing of plastic and garbage waste. plastic is non-degradable. By an analysis over 13% of the land is covered garbage waste. Finally, overusing of non-renewable resources are major effects of environmental damage like fuel and coal.
The solution for these damages providing the awareness in people by using the eco-friendly and bio-degradable bags such as paper and cloth bags instead of plastic bags. moreover, the government should improve the public transport, by that usage of own transport decreases and fuel usage will also be decreased. the government should take straight rules and regulations to control the pollution from the factories.
To conclude this, every problem has a solution. These environmental effects also have the solutions. Every individual and government should work together to solve these problems and keeps the world safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48648648649 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9546425071 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4336280471 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6470588235 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0588235294 20.9669160288 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0554152102495 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178421873657 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392105012908 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425721301046 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049687780143 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.67 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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