Over the past decades, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over environmental issues. While some people say that the government needs to take responsibility, I sanguinely believe that everyone should contribute. This essay will further discuss the reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reasons is that small contribution makes a big difference. Furthermore, In my opinion, the underlying cause of the environmental problem is the increasing number of cars on the road, that increases air pollution. Also, the dirty water which directly flows to rivers pollutes the freshwater resources. These problems can be fixed easily by enforcing firm policies by the government. Apart from that, individuals also need to contribute, such as to reduce the air pollution carpooling service could be used, which will reduce the number of cars from the road.
On the contrary, opponents say that the government needs to take the responsibility to combat this underlying issue and should enforce the law. By implementing the law, the culprit could be charged with the heavy penalties, which will encourage the other offenders to follow the rules. Although it seems ostensibly real, yet the contribution of a person can not be ignored.
To conclude, while there are several views on taking responsibility to fight with the environmental issues, I profoundly believe that this issue needs to fight collectively. To save our environment, everyone included governmental bodies, private organizations, non-governmental organization's and individuals need to contribute equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cars from the road. On the contrary, opponents say that the government needs ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...individuals need to contribute equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, apart from, as to, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50381679389 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20009432586 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5929338865 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096942705634 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334290405496 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482888908019 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573460882465 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01780848514 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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