Environmental pollution is one of the major issues in today's world. It is believed to be such a big problem, that it can only be solved at the governmental level. But, I feel that this is not true and both individuals and the government have to share the responsibility of solving this issue.
Firstly, the government need to take some tough measures and make policies to control the environmental problem. For example, the government must promote renewable sources of energy, define clear norms and guidelines for controlling the pollution made by vehicle and industrial emissions, make waste management and rainwater harvesting mandatory, schedule drives to educate people about environment pollution and at last punish the offenders who violate these policies. Thus, it is very important for the government to take a lead role in curbing the environment pollution.
However, it is also the responsibility of the individuals to take this issue seriously and contribute towards saving our environment. People must follow the policies and laws made by the government to start with. In addition, they must also limit the use of personal vehicles and use public transport as much as possible to reduce air pollution. Moreover, people should plant more trees, reduce the usage of plastics and dispose off waste properly in order to keep our environment clean and healthy. Hence, it is quite clear that individuals do have a major role to play in protecting the environment.
In conclusion, it is a misconception that the government can only play a significant role in managing environmental pollution. Individuals can also contribute and help the government in fighting this epidemic to create a cleaner, healthier and better environment for the future generations to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29681978799 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09832139231 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537102473498 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.533611131 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178322569471 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687166487228 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057685549621 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118914840114 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555244021366 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.