Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Surely there has been no time in history where the life of people has changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals that extreme sports should be banned has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. I am totally agreed with this statement.
To begin with, Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving are thrill of life. Many people like to do these types of danger games for their entertainment. People go to different places to take part in these danger games. People like to entertain their life by making more enjoyable with these sports. With these games we can kill our fear. Many people like these games but there are also these types of people who don’t want to take their life in risk.
Probing further, these games are very dangerous everyone not are part of these games some people like many don’t like. Everyone should take part in these games to remove fear or to be next the fear. Skiing is done in dry snow, rafting is done in waterfall or rivers and these spots are not always opened for everyone.
In conclude, I would say these danger games are important for them who want to prove themselves or who want next to the fear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69194312796 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3159697751 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54028436019 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2780083414 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1538461538 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164445240144 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724403978324 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107673600552 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908710116057 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586147625259 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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