follow the rules
The importance of in other countries, they are allowed to do almost anything they want which was always debatable has now become more the controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that in some countries have very strict rule of behavior, in other countries. Consequently they are allowed to do anything they want. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that children going to abroad for further study but not follow the rule so children duty of the follow the rule. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some merits but one of the crucial effect mostly children have strict rule of behavior in other countries because rule follow for all countries. Hence, it is apparent it is why many are favor of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, can reach to a conclusion that the effects of children have follow the rules are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...t rule of behavior, in other countries. Consequently they are allowed to do anything they wa...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...not follow the rule so children duty of the follow the rule. Needless to say, all these me...
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Line 13, column 110, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...usion that the effects of children have follow the rules are indeed too great to ignor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01680672269 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60557394949 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5637029637 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267278624791 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101941683335 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156230412981 0.071462118173 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213224842656 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124420026843 0.0609392437508 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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