As global trade increases between different countries , many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported to a long distance. Do the benefit of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
While it is true that many, if not most, trades in this generation are performed internationally. International trading has myriad benefit and the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages which will be highlighted in the following essay.
To begin with, every country is not self sufficient and has to depend on other countries for commodities. Because of this, there is escalating trade in international market which is beneficial to not only for countries economy, but also results in mass production of materials suitable to the particular place. Mangoes, for instance are grown in hot and humid climate such as in India, and supplying all around the world fulfilling the global demand.
Furthermore, many countries are facilitated with excellent transportation facilities so even the farthest distance can be reached in few days and also there are preservatives to control the quality of the product.These measures can neglect delivery problem and longevity of the product.
To adduce on aforementioned idea mass production is another benefit. Producing in massive quantity always reduces the labor cost, production cost thus results in decreasing in cost of the final product. Moreover, international trades also binds countries together and helps mend the relation between the countries it has trading relation.
To recapitulate, international trading is propitious for countries and producing in bulk in one country always reduces the production cost, therefore international trade is a win- win situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61304347826 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24130070277 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6821581379 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185892436962 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748973410373 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332798559536 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101008940066 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234120638163 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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