Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?
The environment around us constitutes of those factors which influence the survival of all living beings, an example human beings, flora and fauna. As soon as an imbalance occurs in those factors, our existence is threatened. Likewise, nowadays, the world is suffering biggest problem is global warming. So I will discuss causes and solutions to tackle this problem in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in this era, modern man has raises from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck, accompanied by vast improvements in advancement, but he have to face some difficulties due to largely increase in the technology like pollution and global warming, because environment has polluted by more vehicles. Moreover, the forest of buildings has developed around us, due to which temperature is increase day by day which stimulate the global warming.
Apart from this, it is right said that every dark cloud has silver lining, likewise, this problem also can be solved, if all people and government will contribute in demolishing the global warming. First of all, people should travel in public transport, instead of private vehicles, this proposal will help to diminish the global warming and save the fossil fuels. It will also improve the economy and People will get chance to meet others, that will improve their communication skills. Furthermore, individuals should grow more and more trees, they should avoid the deforestation.
In conclusion, it can be said that government and public both should take some steps to stop the global warming, like government should make strict rule against the people, who contribute in deforestation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: The surrounding environment
The environment around us constitutes of those factors which infl...
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Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
The environment around us constitutes of those factors which influence the survi...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'suffering the biggest'.
Suggestion: suffering the biggest
...tened. Likewise, nowadays, the world is suffering biggest problem is global warming. So I will di...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ast improvements in advancement, but he have to face some difficulties due to largel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27376425856 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83207944828 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0524006939 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.090909091 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171725467947 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628156583463 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488577948342 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974949704525 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020136303187 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.