Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Flora and fauna beauty of the nature, it play an important role for people. Likewise, many individuals keep pets in to not feel alone, but they do not always take proper care of them, so will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs about that people, who do not take proper care of their pets and some advantages of keeping pets in the home.
To begin with, pets play an important role in human life and they more faithful for the human like dogs, likewise, they save the people from some crimes like robbery. Moreover, some animals also do financial help of man, like buffaloes and cows give us milk the revenge of good service, due to which man can earn good and live luxurious life. Furthermore, some people throw outside their wastage food due to which many germs come on their leftover food and they have to face some some diseases , whereas which can eat their pets without any trouble.
Apart from this, some people think the people who do not proper care of their pet should not be allowed them for keeping pets in their home, because the pets may have to face some disease even die due to that individuals, who do take proper care of them. Besides this, only God have right of death or life of any living being, but if any animal will die because of human it is against the nature and it effects on the natural cycle.
In conclusion, it can be said that pet are beneficial for people people, so if anyone keep pets, then they should take proper care of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45353159851 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07023454136 2.71678728327 76% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513011152416 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4247286214 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 20.9669160288 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 7.25397266985 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487084102667 0.242375264174 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212686346765 0.0925447433944 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197399644866 0.071462118173 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335458733469 0.151781067708 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108421827875 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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