Some people think law changes our behaviour. Discuss.
Change is inevitable to keep pace with changing times, it is right said that change is the law of nature. Whereas many people believe that law changes our behavior. So topic has two views, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, laws help the people in some difficulties such as crimes, likewise without law cruel persons will do crimes with that people who live under the poverty line, due to which they cannot complaint against them, so that it also help them to take justice and it gives the punishment to the accused. Moreover, sometime good rules save us from big mishapening and accidents, like government made some rules in driving like wear the helmet and stop on the red light, which save the people from dangerous accidents.
On the other hand, some people are opposite this, they say that laws make them more aggressive, because sometime when they are in hurry, then traffic rules disturb them, due to which sometime they have to face some problems. Besides this, the people who are richest or celebrities, they do not follow the rules,only layman have to follow the law. In addition, politicians easily destroy the laws, whereas officers support them in the crimes.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion government should make strict rules against the people who do not follow the proper rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... said that change is the law of nature. Whereas many people believe that law changes ou...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , only
...elebrities, they do not follow the rules,only layman have to follow the law. In addit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84489795918 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33351618648 2.71678728327 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1414665814 50.4703680194 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.7 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.25397266985 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27370803859 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107709165437 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098468719855 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159056365071 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102221737829 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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