How widely you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage ? what problems will it cause ?
Nowadays, the amount of time people spend with their families is widely debated and has drawn attention from the public. Although people claim that this time shortage is the consequence of the modern world, I believe that modern work environments have serious implications for people and their lives. This essay will further elaborate how this imbalance of work-life situation can pose deleterious effects on people.
To begin with, there are various reasons why people today suffer from lack of time. First and foremost, most couples are now living under the phenomenon of cut-throat competition, long commuting hours and hectic work life. Moreover, this leaves them with a scant amount of time for their families. This is particular in case of children and their unruly behaviour for which parents are held responsible. Thus, children feel neglected and devoid of parental love and affection and it is high time they should understand this fact and manage their work schedules accordingly.
Another key reason for upholding this notion is that people are now under immense pressure to reach the ladder of success professionally. Largely, they feel stressed and depressed and live a sedentary lifestyle. It is generally believed that people nowadays have no time to pick the right kind of food and therefore, switch to junk foods which takes not much time to prepare. Hence, this leads to an extra health-care burden which can be reduced only if they become disciplined to follow a diet and fitness regime.
This essay discussed the various setbacks of living a modern life and its adverse effects on children and health. In my view, the impact of time shortage is prominent in our lives and unless we do something, this situation will only become worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, kind of, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12847222222 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5852344222 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2449964478 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225138620553 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792950340107 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569115612035 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143764907261 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066957972577 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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