Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
In these days, there is no denying the fact that the celebrities in sports and movies are being imitated. While many people believe that this brings about positive impact to people’s live, other feels that the opposite is also correct. This essay offers some insights on both the merits and demerits of the phenomenon.
Perhaps the greatest benefit that people can enjoy from imitating sports and movies superstars is a better society. As a matter of fact, people would set their idols as a role model and mimic their actions. For example, if the celebrities are doing voluntary works such as collecting rubbish along the street, then following such action would result in a cleaner street for everyone. Another advantage is a healthier lifestyle for people. To give an illustration, if a superstar gives up his smoking and alcohol drinking habits, then his followers would benefit from abandoning these bad habits as well.
Nonetheless, like two sides of the same coin, imitating celebrities also creates many problems. The most obvious negative impact may be a degrading society. This is due to the fact that not all celebrities are of good conduct, well-behaved and has a healthy lifestyle. As a consequence, those who follow their idol’s bad habits such as drinking, smoking and wearing inappropriate clothes would turn into a burden of the society and impede its development.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is clear that while imitating celebrities allow people to enjoy great benefits, it also brings upon many drawbacks to others’ lives and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2015503876 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79839592811 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1033056613 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240289047534 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740957223614 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819196276634 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129737625758 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280438628373 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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