The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
These days there is an ongoing discussion among people about increasing influence on our everyday life of transport such as planes and cars. While it is possible to claim that modern communication is not important as other ways of transporting, I strongly disagree. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analyzing the tremendous influence which is done by modern transport.
Firstly, the quickest way to reach a destination in short distance is by car. Nowadays, most of the people have at least one car and annually covers the distance of about 10 000 km. To illustrate, researchers at the Ohio University discovered that time reduction has reached 70% while using a car in comparison to other means of transport. Therefore, it may be assumed as a most effective and efficient way of transport.
Secondly, the planes are mostly recommended for long journeys of people and goods. Such reduction of time in far destinations gives possibility many relatives to stay in touch. For instance, flight from Europe to Canada last only for 10 hours. If there would not be such possibilities many families would never see each other.
This essay discussed why modern ways of transport are such exclusive and needed for people. While there are many ways of reaching the destination those two in my personal opinion are the most effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...eaching the destination those two in my personal opinion are the most effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99555555556 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86142846136 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613333333333 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8898440256 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122633089512 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404992995799 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377554726211 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674153700205 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394955469381 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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