In many countries, people are suffering due to poor health. Discuss unhealthy lifestyle of people and how medical institutions can resolve this issue.
Nowadays, one of the crucial problems of societies is that many people are suffering from health problems. There are some factors which have an enormous effect on that problem like special programs provided by medical centers and the modern lifestyle. This essay will discuss why healthy nutrition and complex examination can easily increase single person health.
A most important factor for our health is eaten food. It is easy to claim what you eat that you become. For example, the scientist at the Ohio University discovered that elimination of meal may increase overall factor of fat below 30%. Many substances and nutrition are helping our body to become healthy.
Many people never make their annual examinations at hospitals. This leads to the situation where many of them is not aware of dangerous risk made by illness. But medical institutions like hospitals may change this situation easily just by making free appointments for patients. Therefore it, in reality, be a more effective way because of intervention than treating deasieses.
This essay discussed how health is linked to lifestyle and what are possible solutions of decreasing suffering. In my opinion, there are many factors how this issue can be resolved but I think the tremendous one it to make proper examinations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... making free appointments for patients. Therefore it, in reality, be a more effective way...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23444976077 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74293329592 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66985645933 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0189289395 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1538461538 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282458848438 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853666328277 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714471716848 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159584859201 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820516491293 0.0609392437508 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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