Poverty is a major issue worldwide. Many charities exist to help collect monetary donations. Who should decide what the donations are spent on? The people in need or the charitable organisations? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
One of the seriously problem of the world is the poor of the people. Many of people think that the donate need to be decided by charitable organisation, while the other group of people agree with the statement that about donations should decide the people in need. This essay will discuss why charities should decide about monetary donations.
Helping people in a bad situation has a lot of positive aspects. Sometimes everyone could be in a bad time in the life without perspective. For instance, after the accidence and fire a house most of people lost health and hole money. Thus sometimes every person might be in ucpredictible situation.
On the other hand, there are part of society who think that the poor people should decide and give out the grant. Examples of this is the fact that every human being know the best how much is for herself neccessary to live. It has been proven by doctors of the Ohio University that people are knowing what they need and which amount. However give out the money without control is not the best way to help society.
There are many factors which have influence on that decission, positive and negative. In my opinion definitely decission about give out the donations should be on the charities side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...f the people. Many of people think that the donate need to be decided by charitable organi...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e, after the accidence and fire a house most of people lost health and hole money. Thus someti...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...t of people lost health and hole money. Thus sometimes every person might be in ucpr...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...tors of the Ohio University that people are knowing what they need and which amount. Howeve...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tors of the Ohio University that people are knowing what they need and which amount. Howeve...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nowing what they need and which amount. However give out the money without control is n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44566730776 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3821339028 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6153846154 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212809126623 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065838235422 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738434789298 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12472969784 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868453529042 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.