The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies discussing the importance of cars and airplanes in our modernized life. Some people think that use of cars and aeroplanes have become an essential element and basic commodity of our life, while others maintain that cars and airplanes hold no significance in modern life. This essay will discuss the importance of cars and airplanes in our advanced lives.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the prominence of cars and aeroplanes in our lives. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that cars and aeroplanes have eased and made our life more convenient. Distances are now being covered in minutes and hours which was once considered as impossible. As an example, with the advent of aeroplanes crossing the Atlantic now takes only couple of hours. As a matter of fact, it is undeniable that cars and aeroplanes have not only made our lives comfortable but also are important element of our lives.
On the other hand, proponents having the view that our lives have become so much dependent on cars and aeroplanes are not cognizant with the comfort they have introduced to humans. Although, they have contributed and augmented in the level of pollution but the ease and comfort they offer is priceless and outweighs the odds. As an example, comfortable and latest cars with air conditioning are being used to cross deserts which was previously done by camels. As a result, the dependence and subsequently importance of cars and aeroplanes in human lives cannot be overruled.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds the view that the comfort, luxury and ease cars and aeroplanes have introduced have made them an integral part of our modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77985149177 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.030671261 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258738151631 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115937295705 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109006393964 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187474074239 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134909728414 0.0609392437508 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.