The past decades have seen the rapid development of the transportation technologies. The world has seen stunning transformations in the industry changing the way the society is shaped. The most relevant inventions that revolutionized the world were the cars and airplanes. In this essay, I will examine the most significant implication that those creations brought into the world.
Many scientists argue that the invention of the cars and airplanes were the milestone that initiated the modern era as it is known today. This is because these new means of transportation allowed the humans to move faster and to habitat places that were unknown or isolated. Therefore, people were able to reduce dramatically the time consumed traveling using the traditional alternatives, which improve the overall well-being of the society. This is exemplified by the measurement of the time reduction in traveling from New York to Los Angeles take up to 80 hours by train, the same trip by airplane takes 6 hours.
Additionally, the new ways of transportation facilitated the globalization and the cultural integration. Thus, the societies were able to connect with each other, providing the opportunity to work abroad, to trade goods in a more efficient way. Eventually, the international trading took over the local exchanging of goods, which it is the main merit of the airplanes. For instance, no long ago the ONU released statistic that showed that the main means of transportation of exportation and importation are the airplanes. As a result, people can have access to broader alternatives, improving the overall economy.
In summary, it was analyzed the most astonishing invention in the transportation field, reaching the conclusion that the cars and airplanes curbed the destiny of the humanity by allowing integration and comfort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2285617713 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9790188293 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103941651885 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326414483324 0.0925447433944 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541842807285 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619631534536 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357745738854 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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