The importance of law in human lifehas now become more controversial. It can be agreed that law definitely changes human behaviour towards breaking the law, but it has some drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate both pros and cons of the impact of law on human behaviour and lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous ways how law affects human behaviour, one of the most obvious being people stop breaking laws. It is also proving that the crime rate of the city will go down. For instance, a number of laws are introduced regularly on the road to prevent accidents which means people must change their behaviour and thinking to accommodate new laws. These rules are usually also introduced with high penalties. Thus, high penalties and increasing laws are changing human behaviour.
Opposingly some people believe that laws cannot change human behaviour. There are some people who any never affected by any kind of change. An illustration, old age people don’t worry about laws when they drive vehicles. In some cases, people don’t want to change themselves. Another example, there are many laws in India, but no one follows most of them because hard to get penalties.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that law can change human behaviour although it is dependant on human nature.
The importance of law in human lifehas now become more controversial. It can be agreed that law definitely changes human behaviour towards breaking the law, but it has some drawbacks as well. This essay will elaborate both pros and cons of the impact of law on human behaviour and lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous ways how law affects human behaviour, one of the most obvious being people stop breaking laws. It is also proving that the crime rate of the city will go down. For instance, a number of laws are introduced regularly on the road to prevent accidents which means people must change their behaviour and thinking to accommodate new laws. These rules are usually also introduced with high penalties. Thus, high penalties and increasing laws are changing human behaviour.
Opposingly some people believe that laws cannot change human behaviour. There are some people who any never affected by any kind of change. An illustration, old age people don’t worry about laws when they drive vehicles. In some cases, people don’t want to change themselves. Another example, there are many laws in India, but no one follows most of them because hard to get penalties.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that law can change human behaviour although it is dependant on human nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...n change human behaviour although it is dependant on human nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02242152466 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59264191767 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614349775785 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6952882311 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9285714286 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.604570913077 0.242375264174 249% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217521476162 0.0925447433944 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199782307265 0.071462118173 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.408071045724 0.151781067708 269% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.303539309036 0.0609392437508 498% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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