The information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative or positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is an undeniable fact that mass communication existence got changed with emergence of information revolution. There are number of consequences raised for the individual as well as for society. Some of them are beneficial, but some has certainly raised an issues.
In my perception, mass communication is playing vital role in our life and society. As it gives us freedom to share ideas and thoughts. It help significantly to connect to our near's and dear's living across the globe. Scientists and students taking out the great benefit out of it as it helps them in their research and education. Furthermore, advent of information revolution has reduced our lot of efforts and time, we used to spend on our day-to-day activities, for instance paying different kind of bills.
On the contrary, mass communication is potentially playing negative role in ruining our society and deteriorating our health. People are under the influence of technology era and uprooting their family values and norms.For instance, kids in family are spending more time with their cell phones and computer systems and not being actively involve in their family which causes their parents feel isolated. Moreover, the more we are surrounded by technology, more it is impacting our physical and mental health which is causing the emergence of new diseases such as Brain and Skin cancer.
In conclusion, I assert that mass communication has made significant changes in our life to make it easy and simple. Also we should stop exploiting its usage otherwise it will not only trouble our life but will also make it difficult to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12121212121 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92227913368 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9317084181 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14952658719 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590993259507 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512470448268 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980243125799 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615129433845 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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