International travel and tourism makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem
Some individuals believed that visiting and exploring other nations worldwide has made them judgmental instead of being open-minded. This is probably due to reason such as not treated well and culture shock. However, this situation can be mitigated by appreciating other nation’s culture and demonstrating respect.
To begin with, traveling can be an awesome experience to many. Yet, this instance can also be traumatizing for some people who have been given unfair treatment. One can possibly encounter locals in several cities with unreasonable attitude when confronted. Furthermore, culture shock can also be blamed for the peculiar feeling of staying abroad as they are not used to their society and practices. To illustrate, Chinese old women in Hong Kong are usually showing an unfavorable mood when asked with directions.
On the other hand, this predicament can be solved through widening one’s perspective. Tourists should be doing their research once and for all before visiting desired international destination. Apart from this, respect is also necessary for other countries’ customs and tradition, considering as a primary tool in understanding their citizens. For example, the do’s and don’t of visiting Japan is vital to learning and appreciating the place regardless of race and ethnicity.
To recapitulate, travelers felt stressful sometimes especially when they have experienced unjust treatment and rude behavior from the local people abroad. But it can be avoided through understanding their way of life. Perhaps, any person would ultimately desire to enjoy and appreciate new atmosphere while having their global tour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...o have been given unfair treatment. One can possibly encounter locals in several cities with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74698795181 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08946298502 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690763052209 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4509762147 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156891884681 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581356490556 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043507818754 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936703403084 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194111773485 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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