It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of voting as a compulsory issue, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of mandatory voting has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on some nations in which voting is compulsory in recent years. it can be agreed that compulsory voting has some positive impacts, but some people claim that it has some negative impacts as well. this essay will elaborate how voting is relevant and people avoid penalties by voting and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why voting should be compulsory, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that voting is a civic responsibility, therefore, people who participate in elections are more concern about the candidates. For instance, in Australia voting is compulsory and this has created a 90% of participation during the last prime minister elections. mandatory voting, therefore, can play a vital role to educate people in politics.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that people can vote in a meaningless way, no reflecting the true voice of the majority. As an illustration, often people under this system vote without having any knowledge of the candidates, they do it because is an obligation and to avoid penalties. meaningless voting, hence, can play a vital role to avoid fines.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of compulsory voting is prominent, although it has some drawbacks that should be well handled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19921875 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93866073726 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5131995579 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0168205791504 0.242375264174 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00722985776296 0.0925447433944 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0118073223921 0.071462118173 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0131399508682 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953503404445 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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