Is it a foolish idea to get married and settle down before finishing your studies? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to say that, professional life and married life both have a pivotal role in our life. An individual cannot live peacefully if there is no synchronization between these two lives. Considering this, some people argue that getting married prior to settlement of career is good, while others opine people must complete their academic path first. This essay will assert both sides of the argument before delivering a reasonable conclusion.
To begin, if a person marries in an early age then he or she has more time to spend with their loved ones before they die. Moreover, in developed countries, mostly parents force their children to live separately. Specifically, if these youngsters get married earlier they get a partner to help them. Furthermore, girls have many restrictions in their parent's house. But when they marry they get more freedom to go out with her husband and enjoy the life more.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages if a person marries before 30 years. Firstly, individuals have to take more responsibilities toward their family, due to which, they do not get enough time to study and most of them leave their study. Secondly, women have to sacrifice their professional life because of caring their children and they have to depend on their husband. Thirdly, marrying at an early age also increases the population. Lastly, as maturity level is low in youngster's chances of divorce increases.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, marrying late is a better option than marrying in early age. This makes a person a more responsible and mature before taking this crucial step.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7981377307 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0471061381 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.25 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133107843622 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460401709105 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394706254766 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885631483923 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152515439751 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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