It town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small shops. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of in town and cities large shopping malls should replace the small shops which has always been debatable, has now upsurge a lot of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of in towns and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trend in an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that upside of in town and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops are instrumental indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. This essay will be elaborate agree assertion and will provide to a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why in town and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops in unreservedly salient, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that in shopping malls we can buy various goods under one roof and second is at shopping malls accept the plastic money we can buy our favorite brand from one place. I can give example I went for bought some cloths for my kid in Trillium Mall Amritsar. I saw various brand available at there like Mother care, Max and more. I did my all shopping for my kid from Mother care brand various dresses I was bought and I see many verities of clothes shown by the Mother care’s staff.
According to me I conclude that shopping malls provide various benefit to customer like gifts, discount and time saving process and specially in malls provide good parking facility to customer so that why cities and town’s people like do shopping from the shopping mall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hich has always been debatable, has now upsurge a lot of arguments in favor and against...
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...brand from one place. I can give example I went for bought some cloths for my kid...
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...t there like Mother care, Max and more. I did my all shopping for my kid from Mot...
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...ought and I see many verities of clothes shown by the Mother care's staff. ...
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hown by the Mother care's staff. According to me I conclude that shopping malls provide ...
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...benefit to customer like gifts, discount and time saving process and specially in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79584775087 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49428412319 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522491349481 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.657510203 50.4703680194 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 104.977214359 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1111111111 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370982444757 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163642469538 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131956450908 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256316867736 0.151781067708 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105402838219 0.0609392437508 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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