Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this ?. Discuss with appropriate examples.
Nowadays, there is a new phenomenon of large shopping malls, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people agree that these malls are more convenient to the public, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that they are affecting small shop businesses. In my opinion, large shopping malls are a new way of urbanization and globalization. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various reasons why shopping malls should be encouraged and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that they offer a lot of facilities, products and services to the public. Moreover, they give heavy discounts, offers, hassle-free shopping and easy availability of products which cater to the needs of people. In addition to this, they are located in the centre of the cities and have a large car parking facility.Thus, shopping malls have become a source of entertainment and amusement for children and people of all age groups.
Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of shopping malls on small shops. The most alarming one roots from the fact that small shops have lost a large amount of business because of promotion of large shopping malls. Moreover, they have limited availability of resources and charge exceptionally high for daily commodities. As a result, small shops have suffered a decrease in revenue and are getting replaced by shopping malls.
In the light of above discussion, one can conclude that the impact of large shopping malls is prominent on local people and the way they present diversified products encourage people to shop easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s and have a large car parking facility.Thus, shopping malls have become a source of...
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... children and people of all age groups. Nevertheless, there are some drawbacks, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19064748201 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88031580557 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7444440917 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254590920125 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104277059519 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630297246417 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161733815293 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491684698958 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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