What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day?
In today's contemporary era, social media has a massive influence on the daily lives of people. While there is no doubt that it is a great information tool, others think that it has led to distraction too. This essay will discuss how social media is a great tool for knowledge.
To begin with, social media provides information about the daily lives of people. This can be seen when people keep themselves updated with their surrounding including the national and international news. For instance, social media provides live updates on weather and traffic jam reports which could directly impact the decision making by people. Thus, it can be clearly stated that social media is a reservoir of local and national information.
In contrast, some people bolster their arguments by stating that longer access to social media leads to inattention and distraction to them. Moreover, it provides access to forbidden websites which can affect young children to a great extent. For example, many people have suffered from a loss of concentration at work and even restricted the access to their children. Thus, it shows that access to social media has adverse effects and can lead to anti-social activities.
In conclusion, I believe despite social media has some negative influence on the younger generation, it still provides a vast source of knowledge to them. This can help to broaden their scope of learning.
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- Many companies involve employees in decision making policy. Some people think that it is important for the progression for the company. To what extent do you agree or disgree? 85
- “ People should pursue meaning, not happiness”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/ or examples from your own experience, observation or reading. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71476046561 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7192078479 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1538461538 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177724620019 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726176133908 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556064151923 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112766927549 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276106544701 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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