Social networking websites are growing a humongous popularity nowadays. Many teenagers as well as adults spend plentiful time using social media. In my opinion, social media has its own set of advantages and disadvantages attached to it which I would like to discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly, with the access of internet and smartphones people can enjoy the various characteristics of social media at any time in a day leading them to spend their useful time in doing activities which are not fruitful. Teenagers as well as adults have become addictive of using these websites. The kind of posts and status updated on those websites make people spend more time than ever imagined. In my opinion, it is entirely a waste of time, furthermore, we need to understand that using social media websites for certain time in a day is fine just for the recreational purpose but, using them to login entire day is highly inappropriate.
Secondly, sometime these websites could help in locating jobs and gaining experience on certain study topics. Also, people can connect to anyone sitting around the corner of the world making them more aware about the happenings in all other places. Additionally, people can use these websites, to become more creative and enthusiastic about their work.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussions will propound to the view that the cons of social media outweighs its pros and hence, proper care must be taken before using these website to avoid any dreadful happenings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudy topics. Also, people can connect to anyone sitting around the corner of the ...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'these websites'?
Suggestion: this website; these websites
... proper care must be taken before using these website to avoid any dreadful happenings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14574898785 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78200406618 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8087862198 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.25397266985 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181090801422 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628718856846 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058033766415 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107964576677 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500087499696 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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