Olympics is celebrated as festivals in many countries, host countries garner huge advantages when such events are organized. I partially agree to the statement that events such as world cup or Olympics bring humongous benefits to the host nations.
Firstly, the origin of Olympics can be dated back to 1800 when it is celebrated as a religious festival, however, as the time passes by the real agenda along with the original ceremonies has changed significantly. Olympics and World cup currently occur in every five years where different nations bid to host the events. It has now become a growing business to host such events. Talking about its advantages, when such ceremonies are conducted it attracts tourists from around the world and people are enthusiastic to be a part of such occurrences. When tourists visits they are stayed in hotels and enjoy local delicacies which in turn lead to the earning of governments and local people. The country in which such games are organized earns fame and recognizance worldwide because every event which is occurring is published and reported live in every nation. It is a billion dollar industry.
However, on the down side, hosting such events is not an easy task it require a whole lot of arrangements which cost humongous money. From the construction of the tracks for Olympics or World cup to organizing a places for athletes to stay it cost billions of dollar investments. Once such events are finished these places are left abandon and no one takes any care of it.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds to the view the hosting an events such as Olympics or World cut has its own set of advantages and prerequisites. But, considering both the advantage and disadvantage it is a beneficial commodity for every nation who is organizing these events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, thus, in conclusion, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 302.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0298013245 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85230834755 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55298013245 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0863117831 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291224231189 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107184002423 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109739167818 0.071462118173 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203276266601 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110757704212 0.0609392437508 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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