The main intentions behind the punishment given is to teach a lesson for conducting a offensive actions, however, many criminals after serving punishment conduct way more crime then expected. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I would like to elaborate on my perspectives leading to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, it is an inevitable fact that crime can take place at any time and at any place, and the main act for punishing the criminal is to send him or her to jail to teach a lesson for their misconduct. This however, sometimes raises a grim matter of concern wherein offenders are observed for conducting much more crime after their first punishment. The main reason might be the fact that by the time they are our from prison they have become habitual of such actions and living style they now feel more comfortable in performing such activities.
Furthermore, crime investigations department are now trying to understand the psyche behind the criminal so that problem could be solved from the initial step.
Secondly, is prison providing the proper guidance and psychological support to offenders so that they will not indulged in such activities?. It is the full responsibility for prison care taker to provide full support to them. Some measures such as career counseling along with mental and physical support and providing them job opportunities after leaving prison could help in solving the muddle.
Hence, the foregoing discussion propound to the views that it is highly appreciable to change the psychology behind conducting such actions so that, the world would be free from any form of crime.
- Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 75
- Governments promise continuous economic growth, but it's actually an illusion. Some people think that governments should abandon this. Please talk about the validity and the implications. 77
- new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas at first has or have free choice to select where to work 89
- In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 80
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.Choose which position you most agree with and discu 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...ach a lesson for conducting a offensive actions, however, many criminals after serving ...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...rving punishment conduct way more crime then expected. In the forthcoming paragraphs...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'indulge'
Suggestion: indulge
...port to offenders so that they will not indulged in such activities?. It is the full res...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tunities after leaving prison could help in solving the muddle. Hence, the for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16730038023 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86782267365 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9052766775 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.9 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177050818256 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648745521505 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069529193019 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084243373639 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405598525841 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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