Climate change currently is one of the major threat to our environment. We are governing the real consequences of climate change in terms of extreme temperatures, droughts, winters and summers. If I will be allocated to work towards the realm of climate change I would focus on reducing the green house gases emissions.
Firstly, climate change has become a daunting problem and the impacts of climate change are humongous. I would like to elaborate in this regard that major threat is the melting icebergs which is the main reason behind the variations in the seasons and natural disasters around the globe. Many countries are governing the disasters such as excessive snow-falls, tornado, earthquake and hurricanes. The threat of climate change is visible prominently and cannot be denied.
If I will be given a chance to work on climate change I would control the overall emissions of green-house gases in our environment. I would personally like to work in a more scientific defined way to develop protocols which conserve energy and hence the overall emission of green-house gases will be reduced. There are also myriad other important steps which could be incorporate to control this grim situation.
Hence, I would like to conclude that humans are the only one who has to take proper care of the environment. There are no major scientific research done in climate change which needs immediate attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ratures, droughts, winters and summers. If I will be allocated to work towards the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le prominently and cannot be denied. If I will be given a chance to work on cli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15584415584 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81454536932 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4946098483 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200442587101 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860164232559 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735537989218 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13001278475 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624979117613 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.